So after taking advice and feedback from Ms Ogunlabi I began fixing all the things she felt that needed change.
I took onboard the things and here is my progress.
Before
After
So i felt that the production logo was perfect as it is so i left it.
I took off the voice when the characters in the scene are shouting over Cain and left the voice over.
I changed the texts from what it was copying the voice over and changed them to reviews. That way it wont look like the title. I also changed Cain to Red to make it stand out. I also added a scene at 20seconds as this was what she felt that looks strong.
That was what i was able to do that day.
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